Thursday, 24 May 2012

Feedback

-Include some own footage.
-Different angles to be included
-Complete the 5 minutes
 
Targets from Jake
1. Make the images look older, posterize?
2. Make the narration slower, Zac talks too fast
3. Give more images to the dialogue
Overall your thing is really good but it just needs improving with these few targets

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